Letters of Inquiry and Request March 22, 2016 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps This is my work. I would appreciate if you could give me suggestions and corrections. Thank you :) Comments dinawikaMarch 22, 2016 at 5:19 AMGood, Ari. The letter is clear and straight to the point.I found that your first inquiry is 'Where I can....'It should be 'Where can I...'Hope it helps :)ReplyDeleteRepliesAri Bekti SetyaningsihMarch 22, 2016 at 2:42 PMOmG I was in hurry yesterday. Thank you for the correction :DDeleteRepliesReplyReplyIstian SabarinaMarch 22, 2016 at 6:09 AMWhat a good letter!I think you can add a compliment, like "I know your design is very beautiful", or anything else.ReplyDeleteRepliesAri Bekti SetyaningsihMarch 22, 2016 at 2:43 PMThank you for your suggestion Istian.. I'll add it soon :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyhakiki saktiMarch 22, 2016 at 3:21 PMGood Ari! The letter is clearReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAri Bekti SetyaningsihMarch 22, 2016 at 9:10 PMI have corrected my post. Thanks for your comments :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment
Good, Ari. The letter is clear and straight to the point.
ReplyDeleteI found that your first inquiry is 'Where I can....'
It should be 'Where can I...'
Hope it helps :)
OmG I was in hurry yesterday. Thank you for the correction :D
DeleteWhat a good letter!
ReplyDeleteI think you can add a compliment, like "I know your design is very beautiful", or anything else.
Thank you for your suggestion Istian.. I'll add it soon :)
DeleteGood Ari! The letter is clear
ReplyDeleteI have corrected my post. Thanks for your comments :)
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