From the exercise 9, I choose (a). The situation is :
"You buy a toy truck as a Christmas present for a child. On Christmas Day, the child hurts him or herself badly when one finger is trapped between the wheels and body of the truck. You write to the manufacturer."
Here is my letter
"You buy a toy truck as a Christmas present for a child. On Christmas Day, the child hurts him or herself badly when one finger is trapped between the wheels and body of the truck. You write to the manufacturer."
Here is my letter
I like your simple complaint letter. Keep writing! Fighting!
ReplyDeleteIt's simple and clear. In my opinion, you should connect the first and the second sentence. Hmm.. You like the products. However you found that it is dangerous (or whatever it is wkwk).
ReplyDeleteIt is a simple complaint letter, Ari. I think you should write the receiver's address more specific because we know that South California has many districts.
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